A Tale of two Lists

I'm trying to come up with a Blood Angles list for the knock-out stage of our Club's 40k Tournament. There are some comp restrictions I have to work with which basically boil down to: no special or unique characters and in order to take multiple choices in Elites, Fast Attack & Heavy Support you must first have one choice in each FOC slot. Oh and it's a 1500pt competition.

With this in mind I present the following two lists for your consideration:

Offensive

HQ
Librarian
Jump Pack w. Blood Lance & Unleash Rage

ELITE
Chaplain
Sanguinary Priests
(2) 1x Jump Pack

TROOP
Assault Squad
(10) 2x Meltaguns 1x Power Fist
Scouts
(5) Combat Blades 1x Missile Launcher, Camo Cloaks
Death Company
(6) 1x Power Fist, 1x Power Weapon; Land Raider Redeemer w. Extra Armour & Multi Melta
Death Company Dreadnought
Blood Talons

FAST ATTACK
Land Speeder
Multi Melta

HEAVY SUPPORT
Storm Raven
TL Multi Melta, TL Assault Cannon, Extra Armour

Fragile scoring capability but the Death Company in the Land Raider and DC Dread in the Storm Raven will hit hard and need to be the focus of your opponent's attention early on affording your fragile Troop units a little more protection.

Defensive

HQ
Librarian
Jump Pack w. Unleash Rage and Fear of the Darkness

ELITE
Sanguinary Priests
(2) 1x Jump Pack w. Melta Bomb
Furioso Dreadnought
Blood Talons

TROOP
Assault Squad
(10) 2x Meltaguns 1x Power Fist
Assault Squad
(10) 2x Flamers 1x Power Fist
Assault Sqaud
(5) Land Raider w. Multi Melta

FAST ATTACK
Land Speeder
Multi Melta
Land Speeder
Multi Melta

HEAVY SUPPORT
Storm Raven
TL Multi Melta, TL Plasma Cannon, Extra Armour

More defensive this one with durable and versatile scoring units combined with nasty counter assault units that can go on the offensive

Have at it all!